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Post by derboo on Aug 16, 2014 6:55:51 GMT -5
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Post by Narushima on Aug 16, 2014 15:59:44 GMT -5
"stocking-clad legs" > thigh-high boots it seems "a salve of arrows" > salvo? "action classic ? apart from" > ? "an ghost" > a ghost
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Post by Chronis on Aug 19, 2014 21:53:33 GMT -5
Since this isn't a 500 Word Indie, you should add an ending paragraph. It seems like the article just abruptly ends that way it is now.
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