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Post by Discoalucard on May 11, 2008 22:43:32 GMT -5
It's been over a year in the making, but it's finally completed! www.hardcoregaming101.net/gundam/gundam.htmThis covers the two Gundam arcade games, G Gundam for the SFC (bad), Gundam Wing Endless Duel for the SFC (good), the Battle Master/Battle Assault games for the PSOne (generally also pretty good) and the two Battle Assault games for the GBA based off Gundam Seed.
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Post by Ganelon on May 11, 2008 23:41:14 GMT -5
Sorry, I meant Ulube (not Valdor, who pilots the Hydra) is gone from the JP PS Gundam W and G Gundam games. Anyway, a great article for an amazing yet underrated series.
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Post by Vendaval Este on May 11, 2008 23:55:51 GMT -5
Excellent write-up!
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Post by zzz on May 12, 2008 6:32:00 GMT -5
Holy shit.
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Post by Revolver Ocelot on May 12, 2008 7:36:06 GMT -5
Couple minor mistakes:
Get rid of the "Origin Mobile Suit " in front of Anavel Gato's description.
In Ple-Two's profile, change "his" to "hers" in the sentence "Like his original"
Haman Karn (from Zeta Gundammbut appears)
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Post by Strider on May 12, 2008 8:16:44 GMT -5
A few small things I noticed:
- In the character listing for the first game, you've switched the order of the pilot and mech name in a few places. The first three (Gundam-Dom) list the machine first, then the next three list the pilot first, and the last two (the soldiers) list the mech first again.
- I'm not up on my Gundam backstories, but I believe that "Zechs Marquise" is an alias whereas "Milliardo Peacecraft" is the character's real name. The Zechs profile makes note of this, but the Milliardo profile implies that Zechs is his real name.
- HC
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Post by YourAverageJoe on May 12, 2008 10:44:37 GMT -5
"Where's the Businessman Gundam who fights with a briefcase and tries to steal the other Gundams' panties, or the Schoolgirl Gundam that constantly giggles and eventually gets assaulted by Tentacle Gundam?"
I lol'd.
The part about the first PSX game needs quite a bit of refinement; there are more spelling errors and the text feels disjointed.
Other than that, the article looks great!
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Post by DojoCasino on May 12, 2008 15:16:01 GMT -5
The character descriptions from the two battle master games are full of bad english, they could possibly do with being re-written... It looks good other than that though, informative as usual. I was unaware that the two battle master games existed
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Post by Discoalucard on May 12, 2008 16:38:07 GMT -5
Fixes noted and implemented. Thanks!!
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2008 17:56:28 GMT -5
From page 2:
Doesn't this sentence ends a bit oddly, considering the article was written by four different people?
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Post by Revolver Ocelot on May 12, 2008 20:31:40 GMT -5
From page 2: Doesn't this sentence ends a bit oddly, considering the article was written by four different people? At the time of writing I was under the assumption G Gundam would be a separate article.
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Post by Ace Whatever on May 13, 2008 2:51:29 GMT -5
Proof reading ahoy!
Electrical? It's actually a beam scythe.
Nataku was the name of Wufei's deceased wife.
Shouldn't it be 'whose'?
Wouldn't it be more accurate to say armor platings instead?
I think it's worth mentioning that Zeong "kicks" by using short bursts from its thrusters.
We can also mention that it can't turn around if you get behind it.
'freakishly' maybe?
'he pilots'?
This isn't going to make sense to anyone who didn't watch the show. I suggest either changing it or explaining who Miriallia is.
For consistency's sake, I suggest replacing 'gaiden' with 'manga side story'. Also, the Astray Red Frame is the prototype, not the mass production version which is the M1 Astray.
This has not been corrected. I already mentioned it in the first thread:
-The Phase Shift gauge doesn’t build up. It’s always full at the start of the round. It also decreases when using energy based attacks and getting hit by physical attacks (thus reducing damage to your life meter). There is no way to restore the gauge once it empties. The only exception is in Seed Destiny BA where the nuclear Gundams’ (Freedom, Justice & Providence) gauge recharges slowly.
Again, this hasn't been fixed:
-Mwu Strike plays the same as Kira’s Strike, it just has a different Super.
Need correcting:
-The Astray Gold Frame sucks health, not the Phase Shift gauge.
However, it can suck the Phase Shift gauge, but only with its super move.
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Post by CRV on May 13, 2008 7:39:26 GMT -5
The arcade games were by a company called Allumer.
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Post by MRSKELETON on May 15, 2008 12:00:54 GMT -5
Speaking of Gundam, has anyone played that squad tactics gundam PS2 game? It was a blast.
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Post by steven on May 15, 2008 13:40:27 GMT -5
From page 2: Doesn't this sentence ends a bit oddly, considering the article was written by four different people? Nope, you're not the only one. Because four people wrote the article, that sentence does kinda come off odd. And Ace, good catches man. It's OK to have a few errors (hey, we're human) but you caught a ton. One or two doesn't really hurt an article, esp. an online fansite, but several as you pointed out just sticks out like a sore thumb after a while.
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