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Dec 1, 2013 22:07:15 GMT -5
Post by dskzero on Dec 1, 2013 22:07:15 GMT -5
One of the best RPG Maker games I've played, maybe the best. I like how the article makes it clear that the game's solid gameplay is just a vehicle for the mindblowing visual and auditive show.
I heartily recommend this to everyone.
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Dec 4, 2013 2:01:11 GMT -5
Post by bakudon on Dec 4, 2013 2:01:11 GMT -5
I have this problem with Iwant's writing style in general, but I think the text is a bit too convoluted, with too many adjectives and complicated phrases, for it’s own good – like a high school essay or something. The writer’s articles in general are a bit overbearing about the artistic merits of their subjects, which applies to this one as well. At least he has eased up on the use of exclamation marks, which some previous articles contained an excess of.
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Dec 4, 2013 4:21:34 GMT -5
Post by iwant on Dec 4, 2013 4:21:34 GMT -5
Well, I used that writing style here as well because I thought it was consistent with the game's tone. I can see how it might appear a bit... agressively stylized to some, but I think it's the best way I can express the feeling I want to communicate.
Regarding my overuse of exclamation marks, I think it comes from the fact that I'm French-speaking. They're pretty "ordinary" in French but I suppose they tend to stick out more in English, so I definetely had to go cut down on it.
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Dec 4, 2013 9:56:15 GMT -5
Post by Discoalucard on Dec 4, 2013 9:56:15 GMT -5
I have this problem with Iwant's writing style in general, but I think the text is a bit too convoluted, with too many adjectives and complicated phrases, for it’s own good – like a high school essay or something. The writer’s articles in general are a bit overbearing about the artistic merits of their subjects, which applies to this one as well. For games like this, which are interesting based almost entirely on their artistic merits, I think that kind of writing is appropriate.
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