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Post by Discoalucard on Apr 30, 2015 22:20:02 GMT -5
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Post by kaoru on Apr 30, 2015 22:49:55 GMT -5
It's Stieg Larsson btw, fell into the usual english speaker trap there.
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Post by onionski on May 6, 2015 19:51:48 GMT -5
Some quick fixes: - "who busy dealing with writer's block while trying to work on his thesis" = who is faced with writer's block while working on his thesis
- "why everybody knows the Chekhov's Gun" = the Chekhov's Gun trope
- "composed the Paradox's soundtrack" = composed Paradox's
- "wanting heavily criticize the game" = to heavily
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Post by hudakj on May 7, 2015 21:00:14 GMT -5
Some quick fixes - "why everybody knows the Chekhov's Gun" = the Chekhov's Gun trope
I'm pretty sure just shortening it to "everyone knows about Chekov's Gun" would work just as well.
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Post by onionski on May 11, 2015 9:06:44 GMT -5
I like that too!
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